Friday, April 14, 2006

Ode to my hot neighbor

Hot neighbor. You're so hot.
You walk two dogs That you got
You smoke cigarettes And I'm guessing pot.
Hot neighbor. You're so hot.

I'd like to invite Vanderbilt Ignoble, poet laureate of Bored for Now, to critique my first poem.

2 comments:

SarahReznor said...

so do you have pictures?

Vanderbilt Ignoble said...

Very pop song-like. The recurring theme of heat is interesting, as the "hot neighbor" seems to be giving off much heat, while cigarettes and pot must be heated to be inhaled. There is also a theme of twos, as he has two dogs, uses two different kinds of drugs(tobacco and marijuana), and the opening line is repeated as a closing couplet, and in each the word 'hot' is used twice.

so do you have pictures?